Lady Sydney

Hi, Alaina! This was really good. I like your characters, plot, setting, everything! Lol But, although this was a lovely read, you have, though few, errors here and there. The ...

Lyssa led me down a long hallway. The walls were a deep purple, and gold curtains were hung over the doors. At the end of the hallway Lyssa knocked on ...

GAH! I critiqued this once already, and the whole thing erased! *kills the 'submit' button. :evil: *sigh* Ah well. Hopefully it works this time. If it doesn't, Mr. Submit Button ...

Aquarius Angel: just making excuses so he would stop asking me to bite him. *pinches you* you weren’t suppose to come on! Gosh, you can’t stall! couldn’t you have saved ...

Haha! I read this the first time you showed me, but never got around to critting it. I knew I was forgetting something... Anyway. I echo. Gabrielle and Rieda have ...

Wow. That scene. E & T. Just....whew. :shock: Full on and in detail, yeah? :shock: Ahem. *scoots away to the next section* Oh btw. I forgot where I found this ...

Well, what more can I say? Adam and Nutty have pretty much pointed out all the points you need to work on. Your description is very well, polished even, but ...

Vern! Seriously, what is up with your characters?!?! Twisted much! lol But I guess that's what kinda makes the story. :wink: And, finally, Tea knows the truth about her brother. ...

LOL. G-wizz. That was great and very....*cough*...steamy. *watches her computer monitor melt* ...steamy indeed. The beginning was very nice as well. And I think that Samantha needs to get some ...

Oooooo, this is good. :D I like Jared, and I don't like him. He's evil, but he's tough. You know? Ah well. He's great! Raed is annoying though. lol But ...

Oooo. Cannibalism! Very interesting; I wasn't expecting that. The beginning image of Tea was detailed very well, and I love how she's so spunky. Ryian scares me. :shock: And I ...

Verrrrrry good, Vernon. I love Quinn, next to Tea that is. She's so great! I love her in her drunken state as well, it's really funny and entertaining. Hehe! I ...

That was really good for your first poem. :D I enjoyed it. The detail and description and such. I'm not really a poet, so I don't know if it is ...

Well that chapter was pretty.........interesting. :shock: Poor Tea!! :cry: She goes through so much crap. Her and the rest of her family!! It's not fair. But, 'tis life. I agree ...

Ah yes. Alas, Quinn's identity is revealed! Everything fit very nicely in place. Have I read this one already? No. No, I don't think I have. *shrugs* Ah well. 'Twas ...